tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8149294992497254597.post4196000495154593873..comments2023-11-14T02:06:47.695-08:00Comments on Robin Saker: Invisible Cities: Thumbnails 1-6Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02272885579694663184noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8149294992497254597.post-40259306477361097602015-09-21T00:02:27.833-07:002015-09-21T00:02:27.833-07:00Hi Robin,
Great to see your initial ideas coming ...Hi Robin,<br /><br />Great to see your initial ideas coming through :) <br />Try not to get too bogged down with drawing lots of detail at this stage...keep your sketches nice and loose; it's all about getting lots of ideas out at the moment, before focussing in at a later stage in the project.<br />I agree with Mark - it's a good idea to start using the Harvard method to reference your work, as this is the way you will need to reference images etc in your essays. You can find the UCA guide to referencing here - http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/article/27187/ReferencingJackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8149294992497254597.post-63705654254073572892015-09-20T15:10:15.893-07:002015-09-20T15:10:15.893-07:00Hi Robin, I'd say you are heading in a good di... Hi Robin, I'd say you are heading in a good direction with Anastasia, I can see a lot of images buzzing though your mind my one concern is that you may have taken "you are its slave" a little too literally with that "you are nothing" sign. If the negative imagery is too blunt then it cancels out the value of the positive imagery.<br /><br /> I think you're on to something with these modern business districts; sleek, clean, modern architecture designed primarily for the finance sector. The areas are beautiful yet at the same time somewhat soul-crushing. It's an intriguing dynamic to investigate.<br /><br /> 6 could be the foundation for quite a mish-mash city.Perhaps the pipes are a means of travel for those who have the balance to move across them quickly? Maybe they're popular with thieves or smugglers. Just a couple of thoughts there.<br /><br /><br /> Also regarding your pictures, what will be very useful when you come to write your essays and film critiques is to get to grips with Harvard Referencing.<br /><br />https://education.exeter.ac.uk/dll/studyskills/harvard_referencing.htm<br /><br /> Providing a more direct way to verify your pictures (Google search results, based on both relevance and popularity, change all the time) will help people verify the source. It gives us all some peace of mind.Spacer176https://www.blogger.com/profile/04901760829312108610noreply@blogger.com